Upload your own animations thanks.
Okay for a start, but there's a lot of key things if you're going to make this animation.
Since it's almost just audio, you NEED to make your audio as clean and as polished as possible. Not just so that you can understand what you're saying, so that ANYONE can understand what you're saying.
Towards the end there was a lot of mumbling, couldn't really understand what you were saying, was there a joke, or a punchline? Comedy or just a story? Couldn't tell. As well as inhaling, everyone gotta breathe sure, especially when telling a story, but you can edit those right out no problem.
I'd suggest you search for your own style, these minimalist drawings with hardly animation. Yeah, that's been done before. Not to say that you can't too, but if you don't wanna be associated i'd highly suggest drawing something that looks a bit more different.
And this is minimal, but it's probably something that just bugs me, and it's not anything to even do with your movie. It's the thumbnail.
The "WHOA LOOK AT THIS CHARACTER IN A WACKY POSE" along with the text, it's a very desperate attempt for clickbait. There's no real need to do that, especially here on Newgrounds.
It got me to click sure, but it was essentially to leave this review and tell you otherwise.
Overall i'd say try new things! This may be your first step but with animation you can do essentially ANYTHING you want, no need to copy joe-shmoe number one. Just make stuff you wanna make.
hey thanks for your tips man
and i will make better thumbnail that matches the topic
I clicked for boobs.
Did you realy? What a Rebel ! Such a cool Guy <3
Eyyy, it's da Flatwood.
Runs WAY batter than the downloadable version. Probably because my PC sucks to the max, can't really vouch for how it would run otherwise.
Adding in controls to the top of the description would be a good idea, even though it is an RPG maker game, it's not always obvious for everyone.
And adding Newgrounds Medals would be cool too.
I was having issues with its performance on my browser, glad you didn't have the same issue.
As for controls, you can actually play through the whole thing with the mouse if you like, there are options there but your right, ill add that into the description now.
As for medals, no idea how to integrate them in with the actual game itself, as far as I am aware this is the first game made in the engine thats been published to the site so the engine itself doesn't support them as far as I know...
If only I could have known about this and done something for it.
Guess that's what happens when you don't ever go to the forums anymore.
Good job everyone, and happy 20th NG!
Sorry to hear that! Maybe you should keep your eye out for the frontpage calendar. We've been on there for a good couple of months.
Bit slow there Solgryn
I'm afraid that was the first to make a IWBTG type game in flash.
Nice effort though.
I love these little hip-hop loops.
If I ever make an RPG styled game someday, i'll definitely be using these for battle themes.
Cool, thanks! :D
Traced art with some additional tweens, does this really qualify as your own art?
Riding along that fine line there.
It's spinning bird kick, but I guess you get the general idea.
Nice use of colour by the way.
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