Carbonwater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Door]

Not bad.
I like it. :)

[Gamer- Turbo]

Nice pixel art!
Music videos are usually tough to do, especially with complicated stuff like this. So it's understandable that the same assets were used a couple of times.
Thanks for the eye candy. :)

[60 Frame Collab 4]

Oh, 60 frames of animation.
I was under the impression that all the pieces would be running at 60 FPS.
Kinda disappointing.

[NoPUNintendo]

Man, I used to think you were cool.
You're starting to get as bad as most of the video game parody guys around here.

Art was really good, just think you're wasting your talents.

TerminalMontage responds:

Well aren't you a negative nancy.

[Black Chick in FInland]

Have my babies.

[Shadow of the Animators]

I know that feel bro.

[Sociology and You]

OH MAN I LOVE MAX GILARDI.

[Project Badass]

Pretty good, you've certainly got some talent there.

The only thing this is missing is a preloader. Once this started playing it stopped before the animation began, I had to wait a little while and reload the page for the whole thing to play correctly.
You can download them free from this website.

EveilEyebrow responds:

Thank you!

[Mushie brought you a Cake]

Speak to the side

For the love of God, don't speak directly into the microphone.

[Minecraft-Mr.Pig]

Well now

Not bad for a first submission, I know back in the day I couldn't make something half as decent as this.

But here's a couple of suggestions.
First of all, you need a preloader. The file size is quite small not to need one, but without adding a stop anywhere this just keeps on looping forever. You can find plenty of free Newgrounds preloaders in the downloads section.
Secondly, your intro is way too freaking long. If you're going to stick that in front of every movie you make people are going to get tired of waiting.
Either make it skipable, or cut it down so it lasts for around 5 seconds.

Just some handy tips and hope you have more luck in the future.