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[A FBF Animation.]

Upgrading from squares

Good to see that you're still putting yourself out there, but FBF may not be for you.
I'd highly suggest you looking into tweening. It may be the easy way out, but hey, it's a lot quicker and simpler to master.

We'll make a flash animator out of you yet, Mr. Brown. ;)

ForNoReason responds:

and I will keep trying! I am trying some new things here and there and trying to build up some "skill". Thank you sir.

[Cooking (bocodamondo)]

Ouch

The story was okay, but that's about all it had going for it.
Drawing was horrible, so was the timing and so was your voice acting.

You should either get you and your friends to do all the voices, or have all the voices done by people from the internet. This combination of yourself and well known voice actors just doesn't work.

bocodamondo responds:

yeah but to your info,
IM from morroco that mean all my friends cant talking english good
yes even myself how you can see.
and my internet friends (cartoonzack) has no time and i was just asking edd
(i think you know that edd is cool about helping other guys,i mean he voice a flash from yours too)
and with my luck he say ok and ego/tomo was asking ME for vocing not i ask (lol)
but i know drawing WAS horrible because it was made with mouse :3
and thanks for comment about story

[Space Noodles - Pilot]

Paradox

Seems that you and I had the same basic idea in mind.
A story about a guy named Red that gets ejected into space, strangely similar to my Apartment in Space series. Not on purpose i'm assuming though.

I really like your character design, lots of unique humans, aliens and creatures, glad to see you drew up plenty of extras to fill up the scenes.
I've got high hopes for the future of this series.

cronobreaker responds:

Hey, I just checked out the series, yeah I can see the similarity of them in finding their way into space but nah didn't know it existed until now. Nice series though "OMG Beans!" ha!

Also thanks for the fav:)

[Crotchless Chaps]

Tweeeeeens

Seems that's all your movies are made of these days.

I say, kill all the crazy amounts of shading you've got going on, and use FBF a whole lot more.

It'll take longer, but people will respect you a whole lot more.

BiffTheTimid responds:

This movie isn't about animation, it's about dialogue and situation. I just can't bring myself to spend months FBF'ing a movie that was only meant to be a few minutes in the first place.

[Planet Rainbow Ep1]

Bad

If you're going to use voices recored from your phone, at least add subtitles so we can understand what the fuck you're saying.

Or just buy a microphone, they're only like 5 bucks.

GreenFury responds:

Well, i just got a mic, and if you are going to tell me to add subtitles mabye you could also tell me how...

[Robot Run Loop]

Well done

I need to find some 3D glasses.

Also, could have used some looping music of some sort to make the experience even better.

TheBoogley responds:

yes sir, that be very true. And it is done! :D

[By the Way, Death...]

Nice

If only the rest of the Shades Gang could animate like this they might be a half decent crew.

AxeShades responds:

the day will come when the shades gang is recognized... the day will come...

[Me and my Imaginations]

Nice

I like it, certainly more entertaining then most musical line flashes.

d8b responds:

Couldn't resist, it was so fun doing it.

[Pumpkin Pies]

This is not an AMV

Do you even know what AMV stands for?

Yeah, I thought not.

volt-light responds:

Animated music video.