Still needs a lot of work
Voice acting was below average, animation was basic, jokes were lame and expected.
You'll need to improve a great deal if you want to impress an audience like Newgrounds.
Still needs a lot of work
Voice acting was below average, animation was basic, jokes were lame and expected.
You'll need to improve a great deal if you want to impress an audience like Newgrounds.
thanks for the comments, ill try to work on all said things to improve my flash!
Lame
Some character swearing and overused internet memes aren't funny.
Also, Sonic fan characters are gay.
Paodies of parodies
That's exactly what I did, and it worked!
You know what you're on about.
Awesome
Nice work, very smooth and the lip syncing was wonderful.
Best submission that I voted on today.
Fived.
Shhh.
Awesome
Love the art style, nice job.
Augh
Don't use the same audio clip over and over for the voices.
Kthx.
Whoa
That was awful.
Nah
Animation and drawings weren't bad, but the characters seriously looked/acted nothing like the kids on South Park.
Make your own characters and audio next time.
I draws stuff and it creates the illusion of motion sometimes.
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Victoria, Australia
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