Carbonwater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hater]

The fake yelling, hahaha.

TrolerVD responds:

Į I tried

[Vinesauce Animated- Squee-G]

Decent for lip sync practice, though I wouldn't really call this "Vinesauce Animated", since there isn't a whole lot of animation going on. Aside from the odd hand tween and movement bounce, this could be comparable to an animatic.
Audio could have been fixed up so there were less pauses, the faster pace the better.

[Steamed Hams animation collab]

Perfect.

[Nameless 7 Part 5]

Worth.

[Weird Employees]

Okay for a start, but there's a lot of key things if you're going to make this animation.
Since it's almost just audio, you NEED to make your audio as clean and as polished as possible. Not just so that you can understand what you're saying, so that ANYONE can understand what you're saying.
Towards the end there was a lot of mumbling, couldn't really understand what you were saying, was there a joke, or a punchline? Comedy or just a story? Couldn't tell. As well as inhaling, everyone gotta breathe sure, especially when telling a story, but you can edit those right out no problem.

I'd suggest you search for your own style, these minimalist drawings with hardly animation. Yeah, that's been done before. Not to say that you can't too, but if you don't wanna be associated i'd highly suggest drawing something that looks a bit more different.

And this is minimal, but it's probably something that just bugs me, and it's not anything to even do with your movie. It's the thumbnail.
The "WHOA LOOK AT THIS CHARACTER IN A WACKY POSE" along with the text, it's a very desperate attempt for clickbait. There's no real need to do that, especially here on Newgrounds.
It got me to click sure, but it was essentially to leave this review and tell you otherwise.

Overall i'd say try new things! This may be your first step but with animation you can do essentially ANYTHING you want, no need to copy joe-shmoe number one. Just make stuff you wanna make.

inkanimations responds:

hey thanks for your tips man
and i will make better thumbnail that matches the topic

[Suicide Hotline Akali]

I clicked for boobs.

Akutox3 responds:

Did you realy? What a Rebel ! Such a cool Guy <3

[ICE DREAM SANDWICH]

Enjoyable!
Quality of the art was really nice, although this was something you'd see more in the lines of an animatic, i'll give this a pass. Let's call it 'stylised' and call it a day. And the live action parts where you woke up, is a nice contrast between the dream world and the real world. Thing like that makes it really easy for the viewer to immediately understand, good job on that.
And the voice work, top notch. You obviously know who does quality work, keep using those guys because they're a pleasure to listen to.

I'd love to see more like this, perhaps a whole series of dream related cartoons. With the same intro (and possibly outro?) so it keeps consistent. If you do make more, be great to see how things could look with some more time on it. The potential is there, just gotta put in the work.

HadenDA responds:

Thank you very much for the review. BTW, it was my intention to give it an animatic feel, so you weren't far off using that description. I can't promise I'll make another one any time soon. It depends on what my mind conjures in the future.... while I'm asleep.