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Sigh.

At any point while animating this did you stop to think "Wow, this is really gay"?
Yes you like video games. Yes you like Nintendo.
We get it.

Your talents are being wasted on this childish video game bullcrap.
Join the rest of us and grow up.

Kirbopher responds:

No! I didn't. I thoroughly enjoyed myself working on this video for the two weeks it took me to make it. It was NOT a waste of my time, in any way shape or form. I've "grown up and joined you" long since, as I've been working on original and freelance projects first and foremost during the entire production of this video. I'm terribly sorry my self-celebrating trip down memory lane by -doing something I wanted to do- ruined your day. But no, please, don't waste your precious sighs on me. I'm sure you have far better things to do than take 5 minutes out of your day to be horribly offended by my mere existence.

<:C

I feel like i'm being watched.

And I like it.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Good job, I'm glad we were able to finally finish this!

Falls flat

Graphics and voice acting wise, this is top notch. But writing wise this is just terrible.
You seem to be suffering from what I like to call the "Seth MacFarlane curse" where random jokes are just thrown in randomly just to get an easy laugh from all the 13 year olds that come here. I on the other hand was not impressed.

I'd like to see some more episodes written like the old episodes, where the jokes actually had some thought and meaning behind them, rather then HURR RANDOM THIS IS FUNNY RIGHT GUYS.

RubberNinja responds:

Yeah, I can understand where you're coming from.

I'll admit I was struggling to find a way to do one of these in the time frame provided (they told me to keep it under 1 minute). The originally script was pushing two minutes, so I needed something that would cut it drastically shorter. Sorry to disappoint sir!!

Sound quality

Next time you export a flash movie go to file > export > export movie, save it where you want. Then a box should pop up, set both the audio stream and audio event to 56kbps.

Sould make everything sound a whole lot better. :]

GodFatherOfRock responds:

Thanks Man.

Sorry the animation wasn't, well, an animation. But thanks for participating!

Meh

You're going to get nowhere if you do the same basic thing that Alvin has already done. You have to do something unique, make this somehow different and not seem like another SMBZ clone.

Improvements that NEED to be made:
Higher frame rate - Everything was moving far too slow. Action scenes need to be fast paced, and it this rate it looked like someone turned on permanent bullet time.
Skipable dialogue - Not everyone reads at a super slow pace, I myself read quite fast and sat there waiting for the next box to appear every time one showed up.
Less dialogue - Blah blah blah, how boring. Good for the plot, but not the least bit entertaining. Try to keep it to a minimum with key points.

Well

Pretty damn good for a first, the animation's a bit choppy though.
Would suggest some more inbetweens.

Apart from that, nice job.

HypNosE777 responds:

Thanks pal >:P yeah well there is only one way to lern stuff right (: just gotta keep trying and trying ^^

\o/

Upgrading from squares

Good to see that you're still putting yourself out there, but FBF may not be for you.
I'd highly suggest you looking into tweening. It may be the easy way out, but hey, it's a lot quicker and simpler to master.

We'll make a flash animator out of you yet, Mr. Brown. ;)

ForNoReason responds:

and I will keep trying! I am trying some new things here and there and trying to build up some "skill". Thank you sir.

Brilliant

I shead tears because I laughed so much.

Ugh..

Thanks for ruining the internet for me.

Skybert responds:

no problem, at least you got a reason to stay offline forever

Ouch

The story was okay, but that's about all it had going for it.
Drawing was horrible, so was the timing and so was your voice acting.

You should either get you and your friends to do all the voices, or have all the voices done by people from the internet. This combination of yourself and well known voice actors just doesn't work.

bocodamondo responds:

yeah but to your info,
IM from morroco that mean all my friends cant talking english good
yes even myself how you can see.
and my internet friends (cartoonzack) has no time and i was just asking edd
(i think you know that edd is cool about helping other guys,i mean he voice a flash from yours too)
and with my luck he say ok and ego/tomo was asking ME for vocing not i ask (lol)
but i know drawing WAS horrible because it was made with mouse :3
and thanks for comment about story

I draws stuff and it creates the illusion of motion sometimes.

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