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[PPAP Pen Pineapple Apple Pen ANIMATED!]

I find this very sexual.

jessejayjones responds:

Mission accomplished.

[Super Stellar Stella (Motion Animation)]

Some good ideas here. Character designs are very nice and so is the art.
The pacing could be a bit faster, a lot of shots lingered on for slightly longer than they needed to.
And that audio peaking, that's no good at all. A very common rookie mistake, but I suggest looking into fixing that before recording anything further.
Overall it's a good proof of concept, not ground breaking or anything, but I could see this getting a small following.

spoonyliger responds:

Oh, thanks!

Yeah, a lot of this video was a first for me. And I know about the audio peaks as well, hahah! They hurt me ears, but you're right, I gotta work on that.

Thanks for the input, much appreciated!

[Temmie]

Undertale fans are the worst.

Aviator123 responds:

well that's your opinion dude and i don't give two shits

[Game Grumps Animated - Legend of Smeef]

Practice, one thing that you need is plenty of practice.

You can draw, sure. But you currently lack what it takes for animation to really work.
Just drawing inbetween drawings to make movement isn't enough, gotta learn yourself some smears and easing. And as previously stated in the previous review, inconsistent proportions. Yeah, that's a real problem. Very common when you start out, but you'll grow out of it.
You're on the right path, just gotta put that work in so you can get better.

Perhaps trying something different that's something not Game Grumps / Star Bomb related? You don't want to be stuck in a rut doing the same things over and over. Try out new things. Even do animation tests and just keep them to yourself.
Whatever you can do to hone your skills.

EpicSaveRoom responds:

Thanks for the tips. If there is any other techniques you could fill me in on let me know. This was my first frame by frame vid. I would like to practice but I rarely get free time to myself in this world, so anything I animate is gonna be towards a finished video. And I can do voices and have original stuff planned but I just wanna animate and not worry about the other stuff yet, so I'm doing more Starbomb and Grumps stuff soon. What do you suggest for the lines? A consistent thickness or have the lines vary.

[Peck Goes to School]

Peck is my spirit animal.

[Pokemon Go is for PUSSIES!!!]

Half this video is begging.
If anything, people will unsub just for that.